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Vase of Flowers

In a classic timeless bud vase The flowers bloom large just in case Holds plenty that could change your face It brings some grace, it brings some grace The flowers are all budding free Looking awesome, high and lofty They reach for the stars quite lovely It’s not empty, it’s not empty Merger of vase and flowers here Placed perchance on the table near For all to see as we all care Great smelling air, great smelling air
Form Monotetra Contest: Monotetra Sponsor: Kim Merryman 6/16/2013

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Date: 7/11/2013 6:20:00 PM
A perfect vision of wonderful flowers in that vase... can smell the fragrant aroma ... great poetic form and congrats on the win :)
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Date: 7/10/2013 9:08:00 PM
Congratulations on a fine win, Russell!
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Date: 7/10/2013 3:07:00 PM
congrats on your win with this lovely poem Shadow x smiles
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Date: 7/9/2013 9:41:00 PM
Congrats In Kim's "Monotetra" contest....take care...LINDA
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Date: 7/9/2013 8:13:00 PM
Congratulations on your writing and win. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/9/2013 11:49:00 AM
Russell, great job with the form! Congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/9/2013 11:26:00 AM
Congrad's on your win. Light & Love
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Date: 6/16/2013 11:37:00 AM
aha, that is why the lovely refrains. it's one of those monotetra poems. Cool entry, Russell.
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Date: 6/16/2013 7:01:00 AM
Reads like a winner to me..Enjoyed reading your work to this new form..Thanks for the visits to my work..Your comments are always uplifting..Sara
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Date: 6/16/2013 6:21:00 AM
Good morning Russell :-) Wishing every Father on the soup a Happy Father's Day.... xox...Linda
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Date: 6/16/2013 3:17:00 AM
luscious work, russell.. i feel the blooms spreading such delight through your lines...fine job, this is..:) huggs and happy ftaher's day!..:)
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Date: 6/15/2013 10:34:00 PM
Wow! So love this poem my dear friend Russell! This is very beautiful poem with a fantastic new form. It's like a song. You always write very well! Kudos! An outstanding write indeed! In fact, I haven't visited yet the contest area but I think this is one of the best contests which is posted lately. A winner for sure. Good luck my dear friend. Always thanking you for sharing your great write & your kind visits on my latest poems. Have a great wkend-more power & blessings! love lots, Leonora
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