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Vapor Trail Dreams From Paper Airplanes

Velvet black abyss Wrap her in your arms Let the waters hiss Raise not the bleak alarms White caress bestow Upon her fiery brow Gentle ebb and flow Release the evil vow Fantasy it be But that’s no never mind Perhaps one day she’ll see His heart was ever kind 12/15/16

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 12/19/2016 4:42:00 PM

I want welcome to poetry soup Diane. Your son is one of my favorite poets here. It is lovely to see where he has gotten his inspiration from. I was very moved by your first poem about Phillip, tried to leave a comment several times but it would not let me.I hope Phillip will find peace in his life and happiness. You sound like a wonderful mother. I enjoyed this poem too. Blessings and Aloha, Connie

Connie Marcum Wong
Date: 12/24/2016 10:14:00 PM

Thank you Diane. Many blessings for the holiday and the New Year! : )

Diane Garcia
Date: 12/19/2016 11:41:00 PM

Thank you for your kind words Connie. :) I read your comment to Phillip tonight when he called...he says you are a sweet lady and a wonderful poet! I'm glad you were able to leave this comment...it made my day as well as Phillip's. Truth be told...I'm no poet, I'm a math person. I like numbers and equations! It was Phillip who encourage me to write. So...Merry Christmas from the Garcia's. :) Diane

Jan Allison

Date: 12/16/2016 12:46:00 AM

beautiful but sad Diane I guess this was influenced by Philip. Hope all is well with you:-) hugs jan xx

Diane Garcia
Date: 12/19/2016 11:43:00 PM

Hi Jan, Phillip called tonight and sent a special hug and hello to you. :) He is trying to write, but has trouble writing on paper. He prefers the computer. We are definitely opposites in that regard! :) Diane

Diane Garcia
Date: 12/16/2016 7:39:00 AM

Thank you Jan :) And yes, I was thinking of Phillip when I wrote this. Seems like that's all I can think about these days, but soon he will be home...aggravating me again!...so I will be normal again. :) I hope you enjoy the holidays...I have 2 weeks off starting at noon today...WOOHOO!! :) Diane

Joanna Daniel

Date: 12/16/2016 12:32:00 AM

This is a fitting write on the topic, Diane, should do well:) hope Phillip is fine:) praying for him:)

Diane Garcia
Date: 12/19/2016 11:41:00 PM

Hi Jo, wanted to let you know that Phillip called me tonight, and I read him all of these sweet comments. He was very moved, and he says to tell everyone thank you for your thoughts and prayers. It really means a lot to him that you are thinking of him. :) Diane

Diane Garcia
Date: 12/16/2016 7:41:00 AM

Thank you Jo Daniel, that is nice of you to say. :) I will tell Phillip you are praying for him. :) Diane