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Vanities of Vanities

Fine words it's true melodious metrical metaphors mingle in alliteration as cadence cajoles with verse of fine verbs and adjectives cojoin to rhyme in the ear drawing the reader near and yet.. say nothing I fear

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Date: 1/15/2013 12:35:00 PM
I like this, Brian! I love the alliteration and my favorite line is "with verse of fine verbs and adjectives" You have a wonderful way with words. Love, KIm
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Date: 1/14/2013 5:33:00 PM
It's ok Brian sometimes folks just need to be stopped on the outside chance they might hear something if they listened! Light & Love
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