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Vanilla Moon

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Vanilla moon of the billion star, milky night, Peering over luxuriant treetops, evergreen. Ivory clouds drift away to blues and bright, On a spicy, pearl night, like none ever seen. Daisy moon in onyx, all cream and chiffon, With what loveliness is darkness enhanced. Its alabaster rays pour upon a snowy swan- Joy pranced on a path that sun last danced!

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Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/10/2023 11:09:00 AM

- Beautiful as we can only dream of...vanilla moon... daisy moon in onyx ... in delicious creamy chiffon ... love it, Evelyn :) - hugs

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/10/2023 12:20:00 PM

Your kind words are so valued. Thank you very much. :)

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/10/2023 9:32:00 AM

"Daisy moon in onyx, all cream and chiffon, With what loveliness is darkness enhanced. Its alabaster rays pour upon a snowy swan- Joy pranced on a path that sun last danced!" Superb poetry...deep and delicious. Salivating for the next scoop. Love it!

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/10/2023 12:18:00 PM

Your treasured comment is a joy to read, Joe. Thank you. :)

Vijay Pandit

Date: 9/10/2023 5:49:00 AM

Vanilla moon of the billion star, milky night, Peering over luxuriant treetops, evergreen.... beautiful opening to a beautiful poem, Evelyn. Much enjoyed your descriptions that bring forth the imagery.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/10/2023 12:16:00 PM

Thank you for your kind compliments, Vijay. It's a delight to read your comment. :)

Christina Bowring

Date: 9/10/2023 3:36:00 AM

Dear Evelyn this is so deliciously enchanting. So poetic full of breathtaking imagery. ‘Joy pranced on a path that sun last danced’. Glorious! The whole poem is so elegant. Loved it! Thank you for sharing. Blessings to you.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/10/2023 12:12:00 PM

Thank you, dear Christina, for your heartwarming, lovely response. I hope your day is blessed. :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/10/2023 1:34:00 AM

With what loveliness is darkness enhanced: So true of your poetry. I love your muse efforts because they color my life.

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/10/2023 12:08:00 PM

Victor, that is so wonderful to know. Thank you for your words of inspiration and joy. :)

Ink Empress

Date: 9/10/2023 1:21:00 AM

I love the rhymes here and use of colors is so fitting for the theme of the poem. So well written and delivered. I especially loved “ ivory clouds drift away “ “ spicy pearl night” how creative and moving is this profound take on vanilla moon. Your way with writing is so eloquent. Goodluck for the contest

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/10/2023 12:04:00 PM

Thank you so much for the pleasure of your very gratifying remarks, and thoughtful well wishes. I hope your day is blessed. :)

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/9/2023 5:47:00 PM

Ooh then you give us vanilla to imbibe! Cream and chiffon…ahh

Evelyn Judy Buehler
Date: 9/10/2023 11:59:00 AM

So happy you enjoyed the poem, Kim. Thank you. :)