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Vampire's Visit

An open window smiled invitingly, she laughed and slowly crept into his room, he slept on unaware of pending doom, she smiled, her fangs a scary sight to see. She softly stroked his face and kissed his throat, he didn't waken as she broke the skin and lapped the spurting blood that flooded in, so sated that her form began to bloat. Unseen, his wife was watching, grinning wide; the vampire saved a former battered bride. written 18th November for Constance's V (vampire) contest

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Date: 11/29/2021 1:14:00 PM
Jack, congratulations on your Second place win in my "V" New or Old Poems Contest. Your poem is wonderful ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 11/27/2021 12:03:00 AM
I must go with Lindsay's flow of thoughts and just desserts - thanks for the smile you brought to my face. Well penned Jack, Hugs, blessings, Jennifer.
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Date: 11/26/2021 5:47:00 PM
Ooohoo! Excellent Jack. I really like the turn of this one. Good stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 11/23/2021 7:43:00 PM
Great feel, Jack, congratulations on your win in Constance's contest. Have a great Thanksgiving with family. Hugs Eve
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Date: 11/23/2021 7:31:00 AM
Dropping back with my congratulations on your win jack, hugs jan xx
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Date: 11/20/2021 2:47:00 PM
Way to go to end all batterers. LOL..Don't know if that is spelled correctly. Reads like a good contender to me. Thanks for the visits. Sara
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Date: 11/18/2021 7:41:00 PM
Hello Jack ... at first I thought the meal was gruesome, but the just desserts were deserved - thanks Jack - Lindsay
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Date: 11/18/2021 3:19:00 PM
oh wow, now THAT is great JUST DESSERTS (for the vampiress as well!!!) Love this.
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Date: 11/18/2021 12:34:00 PM
That was quite the twist saving her from his fist. This made me chuckle. ;0)
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Date: 11/18/2021 11:19:00 AM
oooh deep dark and creepy and he got his just desserts, good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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