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Vampire Visit

I went to bed one breezy night
Pulled up the covers oh so tight
Dreams came upon me quite so quick
Beyond the curtain of foggy mist
There stood a vision of perfect stature
Eyes penetrating into deep inner nature
While laying there sound asleep
Upon my bed He did creep
Scents of lavender filled the room
As my heart pounded and was consumed
With visions so lovely beyond compare
As we were lifted together up in the air
A tight grasp upon me this creature of prey
As I gave no resistance and all colors went gray
At rhythm as one we pulsated soully entwined
Feelings inside that felt so utterly sublime
All at once and out the window he went
Leaving me lay there exhausted and spent
My eyes they closed in famished sleep
Beyond great borders wide and deep
Morning's sun arose through the open shades
And to start another day my way I made
To see a vision upon my neck lo and behold
The stranger in my dreams left two little holes

Vampires is the topic I chose to inspire this poem.

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  1. Date: 8/5/2010 7:36:00 PM
    Awesome Scarlett.. and vampires are interesting creatures forevermore.. luv..

  1. Date: 7/19/2010 7:06:00 AM
    I see from this fabulous written poem that you are not afraid of vampires, hahaha!!! Enjoyed the read this afternoon, Scarlett! Have a great week!...Gert

  1. Date: 7/15/2010 4:53:00 AM
    wow what a wonderful poem. It really took me there. I could see the same vision. Thanks for the comments on my work.

  1. Date: 7/15/2010 4:49:00 AM
    I am a fan of vampire lit. in all forms Scarlett and now I'm a fan of yours. Revealing, tastefully, the nuanced pleasures of Vampire lore. Nice. tom

  1. Date: 7/15/2010 1:48:00 AM
    Very romantic and sensuous write, Scarlet... The last line was a real knockout!...I wonder if there are female vampires? If so and she's like this guy, she can fly through my window anytime! Also thanks for your kind and encouraging comments - Tim

  1. Date: 7/14/2010 3:51:00 PM
    Ooh enjoyed this one too, Scarlett! This was such a delight to read about vampires, enjoyed the rhyme :) btw just a typo for "lavender" hope this helps and wish you the best in the contest :)

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 7:00:00 PM
    Really enjoyed your write and will read more of it. If you have not checked it already please take a look my new poem titled criminals part 3- thank for the read and enjoy your day.

  1. Date: 7/13/2010 6:27:00 PM
    Ohh Vampires are my favorite-I know I know I'm crazy, I've been told! Wonderful Write Scarlett!~Tirzah~