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Vampire Visit

I went to bed one breezy night Pulled up the covers oh so tight Dreams came upon me quite so quick Beyond the curtain of foggy mist There stood a vision of perfect stature Eyes penetrating into deep inner nature While laying there sound asleep Upon my bed He did creep Scents of lavender filled the room As my heart pounded and was consumed With visions so lovely beyond compare As we were lifted together up in the air A tight grasp upon me this creature of prey As I gave no resistance and all colors went gray At rhythm as one we pulsated soully entwined Feelings inside that felt so utterly sublime All at once and out the window he went Leaving me lay there exhausted and spent My eyes they closed in famished sleep Beyond great borders wide and deep Morning's sun arose through the open shades And to start another day my way I made To see a vision upon my neck lo and behold The stranger in my dreams left two little holes Vampires is the topic I chose to inspire this poem.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 8/5/2010 7:36:00 PM
Awesome Scarlett.. and vampires are interesting creatures forevermore.. luv..
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Date: 7/19/2010 7:06:00 AM
I see from this fabulous written poem that you are not afraid of vampires, hahaha!!! Enjoyed the read this afternoon, Scarlett! Have a great week!...Gert
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Date: 7/15/2010 4:53:00 AM
wow what a wonderful poem. It really took me there. I could see the same vision. Thanks for the comments on my work.
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Date: 7/15/2010 4:49:00 AM
I am a fan of vampire lit. in all forms Scarlett and now I'm a fan of yours. Revealing, tastefully, the nuanced pleasures of Vampire lore. Nice. tom
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Date: 7/15/2010 1:48:00 AM
Very romantic and sensuous write, Scarlet... The last line was a real knockout!...I wonder if there are female vampires? If so and she's like this guy, she can fly through my window anytime! Also thanks for your kind and encouraging comments - Tim
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Date: 7/14/2010 3:51:00 PM
Ooh enjoyed this one too, Scarlett! This was such a delight to read about vampires, enjoyed the rhyme :) btw just a typo for "lavender" hope this helps and wish you the best in the contest :)
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Date: 7/13/2010 7:00:00 PM
Really enjoyed your write and will read more of it. If you have not checked it already please take a look my new poem titled criminals part 3- thank for the read and enjoy your day.
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:27:00 PM
Ohh Vampires are my favorite-I know I know I'm crazy, I've been told! Wonderful Write Scarlett!~Tirzah~
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