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vampire love

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vampire love

You have taken 
My soul 
Like a vampire 
You drained me 
Of everything 
All I see 
is night 
You sucked 
The life out of me 

Prince of my soul 
I am 
your Vampiress 
Under duress 
I must steep 
In your blood 
flowing emotion 
trickling down
the  neck 

Your suckling
love is warm 
It invites me in 
As you drink  
So completely; 
I am 
one with you, 
within darkness 
Prince of desire 

I am 
your temptress 
begging For you 
I shall undress 
loosening 
the strings
upon my corset 

 lighting the fire 
 taking you higher 
to immortality
forever to rule
darkly lust
loves
 blood

liam Mcdaid & Mystic Rose

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  1. Date: 9/28/2013 3:11:00 PM
    Another great poem----Remarkable job!---------Julie :-)

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 6:44:00 PM
    Hi Liam, well, looks like you and rose wrote a good one here. The Vampire Love's its victim in the strongest way. There is a connection of spirit before the blood is even tasted. Sounds to me as if you have a rogue. You are back on your favorite dark my friend. Dark passion in the night. An enjoyable write by you both. Have a good day. Your Friend....MIKE.

  1. Date: 9/27/2013 1:16:00 PM
    I read this poem yesterday, from Mystic Rose, and I will tell you exactly what I said in my comments to her...This poem was awesome! It is dark, yet passionate. I loved it! An excellent collaboration with Rose! Was this written for the "Team Work" contest? If so, I wish you good luck!

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 7:04:00 PM
    Nicely done

  1. Date: 9/26/2013 6:38:00 PM
    Hii Liam, I have worked on it a bit more, please check your soup mail shortly xxxx