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Vampire

Climbs through the window Tiptoes towards the large bed Leans over the girl Prepares to bite her soft throat She’s already dead – that sucks! for Nancy's contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 10/11/2011 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry placing in Nancy's contest Jack. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/10/2011 10:37:00 PM
oh Jack am so happy to congratulate u on this one luv.. a grand winner and unique write my friend... awesome... enjoy..
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Date: 10/10/2011 9:38:00 PM
Oh, man... like, i put myself in his shoes... and can't imagine ANYTHING suckier! Dig it, jack, and preesh your presence. Beauty day to ya. Namaste~N
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Date: 10/10/2011 6:48:00 PM
amazing piece Jack.. I so luv this one.. suspense and drama..good luck in Nancy's contest ..this is top notch..
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Date: 10/9/2011 10:37:00 PM
Great work...I must admit..it made me laugh with goulish delight...lol.BG
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Date: 10/9/2011 2:21:00 PM
Jack, a perfect months for vampires... thanks for the smile ... Maybe the cat is alive... Ha ha.. wonder.. who got to her first... Good luck in the contest,..p.d
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Date: 10/9/2011 2:20:00 PM
I guess Dacular got there first...I like the surprise ending..Reads like a winner with the double meaning of the word..Good luck in the contest..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work..Sara
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