Vampire

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“Fear not the legendary vampires, but dread the vampires living among us, thirsting for blood!” ~ By Poet Vampires sleep by the day and fly by night. They are afraid to come out in to light. They feed on human blood. Their lips are scarlet red. Their flaming eyes are luminously bright. Vampires dance in the pale glow of moonlight. Return to their graves before break of light. They cause such severe dread. They are souls of the dead. Ooze out blood and leave the victim to blight. April.21. 2023 Writing Challenge ‘V’ words Poetry Contest Sponsor- Constance La France

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Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 4/24/2023 8:23:00 AM

Hi Valsa, Vampires as in myths, if they were for real, how would we sleep at night knowing they are on the loose. Makes me think of THE SUDAN, all the criminals were left out of jail, imagine the people left behind who have not been air lifted to safety, knowing that besides the rebellion that has broken out between the Sudanese and those wanting to overthrow them, the people have to contend with criminals that could break into their home, living there must be a nightmare. Hugs Jenn.

Constance La France

Date: 4/24/2023 5:21:00 AM

Valsa, thank you so much for sharing your amazing poem with us in my Writing Challenge, you write a great vampire poem and I like your quote and the image, congratulations. !

Valsa George
Date: 4/24/2023 8:25:00 AM

Thanks a b lot dear Constance for the beautiful words of encouragement and the chance given.

Alfonso II Warally Ngengethe Mussabwa Chris

Date: 4/23/2023 4:04:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Contest...Valsa. Wonderful write.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 4/23/2023 2:08:00 AM

- Yes, they're not exactly pretty to look at... - Congratulations on your wonderful win in the contest, Mala :) - hugs

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/23/2023 12:39:00 AM

A beautiful couple of limericks on the theme of vampires illustrate beautifully as the vampires are. Congratulations!

Sam Kauffman

Date: 4/22/2023 2:50:00 PM

Now if that isn't scary AND spooky all at the same time, I don't know what is! Absolutely soul chilling my dear friend! Short and sweet(?)! Well done dear Valsa! Congratulations on your first place win! The "V's" were fun! Sending you blessings in the moonlight without the vampires sweet friend!!!