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Valley of Promise

From the darkest of the days had I endured all alone; With a promise of comp'ny never set into stone. From the greenest of valleys and a glorious sky Did he step into me, just a lone passerby. He had promise and loy'lty, or so I had thought. . And every word that he offered I easily bought. To feel and to clutch with the purest of love And not a pain to touch or a worry thought of. To hear his heart beat was a symph'ny alone. . But a promise to remain never set into stone.

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  1. Date: 3/19/2013 2:42:00 PM
    Beautifully wrought poem... sad... but beautifully said.

  1. Date: 2/6/2013 12:14:00 PM
    Another really nice poem. I like you're writing style. The couplets flow nicely and the poem is well developed.

  1. Date: 12/26/2012 9:31:00 PM
    Wow. this is a beautiful poem - JH

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 5:02:00 PM
    This is quite the brilliant write my friend! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening and illustrious poem this evening! What a powerful message you have portrayed here! Great Work!!