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"valley of Lost Hope"

Dead men lying on the bottom of the grave wondering when savior comes Is he going to be saved maybe you're a sinner into your alternate life maybe you're a joker,maybe you deserve to die They were crying when their sons left god is wearing black he's gone so far to find no hope he's never coming back... They were crying when their sons left all young men must go he's come so far to find the truth he's never going home Young men standing at the tops of their graves wondering when jesus comes are they gonna be saved Cruelty to the loser,Bishop tells the King maybe you're a mourner,or just deserve to die they were crying when their sons left god is wearing black he's gone so far to find no hope he's never coming back They were crying when their sons left all young men must go he's come so far to find no truth he's never going home Welcome to the soldier side where there's no one here but me people all grow up to die there is no one here but me Welcome to the soldier side sons come here to die people on the soldiers side .... come here,but be willing to die....

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 9/10/2010 10:40:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup... enjoyed your creative write tonight.. hope u check out the contest scene .. and enter ..good luck with luv..
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Date: 9/10/2010 12:16:00 PM
What a beautiful day to sit and read poetry here at PoetrySoup. Please keep writing and sharing your poems with us. What a diverse group of poets we have here I am so happy you are one of us Kristen. Have a wonderful weekend filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 9/9/2010 10:46:00 PM
Nice one, enjoyed your write..P.D.
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Date: 9/9/2010 8:11:00 PM
A nice well composed write valley of lost hope on the Faith, Kristen
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