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Valley Creation

In the green valley Gentle zephyr blew my hair Breathing pure fresh air Contemplating dawn birds flock Commingling with the cosmos For One Nature Tanka - Inspired By My Short Poem Posted On Contest Page - Poetry Contest Sponsored by Rick Parise Eight Place 7-31-2016

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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/8/2016 6:08:00 AM
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Congratulations on your win ...
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/8/2016 9:18:00 AM
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Thank you Probir
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Joanna Daniel
Date: 8/5/2016 12:42:00 AM
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Lovely tanka:) Congratulations on your win, Nayda:)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/5/2016 6:22:00 AM
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Thank you Jo
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Alexis Y.
Date: 8/4/2016 11:00:00 PM
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Hi Nayda, Congratulations on your winning write: -) Alexis
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/5/2016 6:22:00 AM
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Thank you Alexis
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Sandra Haight
Date: 8/4/2016 10:39:00 PM
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Nayda, congratulations on your nice placement in the contest. Lovely imagery in your nature Tanka. Hugs, Sandra
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Tom Arnone
Date: 8/4/2016 7:25:00 PM
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Enjoyable tanka, Nayda. Favorite line, "Commingling with the cosmos." Congrats on your placement. :-)
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/4/2016 9:50:00 PM
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Thank you Tom
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/4/2016 5:34:00 PM
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very nicely pictured, Nayda. Congrats on your win. Nice to share this number placement with you.
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/4/2016 9:50:00 PM
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Thank you Andrea
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Lu Loo
Date: 8/4/2016 4:41:00 PM
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Nayda, a wonderful tanka lady...congrats on your placement! :)-luloo
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/4/2016 4:50:00 PM
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Thank you Laura
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Probir Gupta
Date: 8/1/2016 5:29:00 AM
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"Commingling with the cosmos" - a rich poetical line ... an emotionally rich Tanka ...
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Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 8/1/2016 11:23:00 AM
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Thank you Probir

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