Valley

We enter the valley Of shadows Of thorns A narrow path Well worn Where friends Have travelled Tattered, torn No sunlight Before new dawn We said Goodbye Our souls forlorn Yet hopeful joy To be reborn CV 19.01.24

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Hiya Sharma

Date: 1/21/2024 8:38:00 PM

Oh this is truly a transformative write dear Cindy, I especially love how evocative it is, with forlorn feeling when a soul is worn out, on the edge of resilience and wishing to be reborn as a hopeful dawn.. This touched my heart, as it's so resonating too, your rhymes are absolutely impeccable and giving a rich flow to these words.. Absolutely a heartfelt read it was, conveying vivid emotions with an effortlessly tone.. Sending you so many best wishes & light ~

Cynthia Vipond
Date: 1/21/2024 10:05:00 PM

Thank you dear Hiya x I am enjoying reading your eloquent poems now too. Best Cindy x

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 1/21/2024 10:16:00 AM

This poem had a rhythmic rhyme and thoughtful story of change. I enjoyed reading it. Thanks.

Cynthia Vipond
Date: 1/21/2024 10:03:00 PM

Once again bless you dear Hilda. Best Cindy x

Paul Bell

Date: 1/21/2024 3:00:00 AM

I like the reborn bit. If only I could change some things in my new life.

Cynthia Vipond
Date: 1/21/2024 7:42:00 AM

Change is where hope lives, Paul dear. Pain is the great teacher but no-one wants to go to his classes. Best Cindy x (and thanks for calling by)