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Valentine's Day

VALENTINE’S DAY It’s a day of varied thoughts Many of God’s sweetest love Though say it I must Some of oh yes! even lust Just hear the breezes moan and croon Offering some love-fashioned tune And just see how Linda’s eyes light up When struck by a frosty golden Moon Then when it’s time Two hearts in perfect rhyme Beguile your lass Let not a moment pass Whisper words so sugary soft Nestled snug in her dad’s hay loft “My heart dear girl is truly thine Will you be my valentine?” Dave Austin

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Date: 4/3/2017 8:37:00 AM
Big smiles here from me Daver. I love the joy this poem rendered. I sure missed a lot getting ill over V. Day. A Fave! 7 ; )
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Date: 4/4/2017 9:28:00 AM
Heard you'r back - this makes me happy. Love, daver
Date: 2/22/2017 11:57:00 AM
Hey Daver!! Sounds like an Itchy and Scratchy affair? Enjoyed this, you are a champion at tackling just about any season or event. I've been writing, colouring and creating in a new book I have. I've called the book "Happy", and I know that happiness is something one can share. I have something to share with you, I'll send it straight off after I get off the Soup. It's silent, though musical, cool but warm. Keep well, Love, Mikki
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Date: 2/3/2017 11:49:00 AM
During storms, I often hear "music" in the wind, Daver. For some reason making love seems more exciting then. I wasn't prepared for the ending, so you caught me by surprise. A delightful, well composed Valentine poem!
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Date: 1/30/2017 4:22:00 PM
Who could resist being your valentine with this beauty, Dave
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Date: 1/30/2017 3:25:00 PM
I really love this sweet sweet valentine poem!!!
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Date: 1/30/2017 12:03:00 PM
Awd how romantic an ending to your poem... in 27 years we haven't celebrated this day ever but I did propose to my hubby one Valentine's day so I guess I am a little bit romantic lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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