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For Valentine Haiku plus  One Questionqu Contest

Written on 2/5/2015

Passionate longing Here alone, yearning for you Come here, my darling. Your eyes caress me Strength restrained in gentle touch Hearts beating wildly. Our love has no end My soul longs for you to stay Must you leave again? Written on 2/5/2015

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Date: 12/3/2015 1:20:00 AM
Laura, lovely haiku, Enjoyed. SKAT
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Date: 3/29/2015 9:55:00 PM
LAURA, Thank you for the sweet reply to my comment. Love LINDA
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/29/2015 11:06:00 PM
Of course, Linda! You are a gifted poet!
Date: 3/24/2015 6:25:00 PM
wonderful longing, especially in the ending one. Congrats, Laura.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/26/2015 12:32:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea! I enjoyed yours as well!
Date: 3/24/2015 3:29:00 PM
romantic yet sad write Laura - congrats:-) Hugs jan xx
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/26/2015 12:32:00 AM
Thanks, Jan :)
Date: 3/22/2015 3:31:00 PM
Lovely, romantic and seemingly sad, but I did not hear his answer! Congratulations on your podium win, Laura! // paul
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/22/2015 6:08:00 PM
Thank you, Paul! I am surprised and happy, too! :)
Date: 3/22/2015 1:42:00 PM
Laura, Congratulations on your awesome win. Thank you for supporting my contest. Stop by my latest blog "it's never too late, PUPPY LOVE" if you'd like. Enjoy your late valentine win, -Valentines field forever- LOVE LINDA
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Laura Leiser
Date: 3/22/2015 6:08:00 PM
Thank you so much, Linda! I'm so glad you liked it and gave me such a good standing in the contest, too! I didn't expect it, and am very encouraged by it! :)
Date: 2/6/2015 11:11:00 PM
Nicely done. this contest is filling up and I am still sitting here with nothing ready for it.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/6/2015 11:28:00 PM
I'm sure you'll come up with something soon, Andrea. You have a great imagination from what I see! :)
Date: 2/6/2015 11:48:00 AM
Thank you for your kind comment, Broken Wings. Your poetry is lovely, too!
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Date: 2/6/2015 9:08:00 AM
Laura, your haikus are enchanting and full of love and thanks for visiting my poetry ~~
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/6/2015 11:49:00 AM
Thanks for your kind comment, Broken Wings. Your poetry is lovely, too!
Date: 2/5/2015 10:06:00 PM
Yes, for lovers . . . the comings and goings . . . loving generously the ones that are in our lives . . .
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/5/2015 10:10:00 PM
I agree with you, David. We need to cherish the moments we have with them. Thanks for your comment.
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/5/2015 10:06:00 PM
Thank you for your comment, Dave. So true!
Date: 2/5/2015 8:27:00 PM
I like all of them, but the middle one is the best! should do well in the contest. BG
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/5/2015 8:37:00 PM
Thank you, Barbara! I'm grateful to have a wonderful man that moves me, even after 36 yrs. of marriage!
Date: 2/5/2015 8:24:00 PM
Very romantic valentine and a such a smooth-flowing triple Haiku. Best wishes for the contest. Hugs, Sandra
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Laura Leiser
Date: 2/5/2015 8:36:00 PM
Thank you, Sandra! After 36 yrs. Of marriage, I still feel this way :)

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