Valentines

Valentines ?? xinxi ??xinxi? wo ? zi I know Xiao Ling, that I should not be doing things like this !!! You, being the last great love of my life, I cannot resist I gave my heart to you Xiao Ling, and that is forever !!!, no other. I realize that you have given your heart, into the hands of another. This is his time -never again to be mine - and yours. Reality is, upon me, my love, you have closed the doors. Never the less Xiao Ling, to you, on this day, I do bring. Best wishes, these gifts and, my love song, to you I sing. May you and yours enjoy this precious moment. Know, from this one’s heart, this is sincerely sent. For my transgression Xiao Ling, please forgive. Know that, no matter what, my love for you doth live. B. J. “A ” 2 February 9th 2015

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Kp Nunez

Date: 2/11/2015 12:32:00 AM

Just had to read one from you while taking a lunch break, sire, and was pleased to see you have a new post today. I'd love to listen to the rhythm! Curioser and curioser...Isn't it a pleasure both to the mind and the senses, reading pieces like this, which must have been fashioned only after a story of much love, passion and tears that were shed, has ended. Wishing you happier days and an even happier Valentine, more smiles under now a downcast sky from the land of thousand isles...Kim:)

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 2/11/2015 5:26:00 PM

Please do not be my Dear, “ Sorry if my sudden inspiration to use a tag at the end of each comment or message ” it is you and you should always be the you that is upfront about all of who you are !!! Sorry to read this “ in all my years, have never set foot in Britain, Croatia or Spain. ” Kim, for you are so close and what adventures !!! Thank you Kim, for the enlightenment “ I am using a pen name sire ”, “ last name belongs to my family ”, “ Kim is to indicate Asian, ”, “ Patrice is the next name close to my real one ”. “ Your deductive analysis over my place of origin and nom de plume put more smiles on my lips, sire...Kim :) ” I am glad, my Dear, that this old fool was able to amuse with his ignorance L W M. Keep on smiling young Lady, and I hope the I will be able to elicit more smiles as we walk further down the road we are on .

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 2/11/2015 5:26:00 PM

Good morning Kim : You simply amaze me Girl !!!, I just cannot believe Kim, the quantity, quality and speed with which you communicate your thoughts and feelings. Thank you for the enlightenment “ You saw the pun, quite accurately sire. ”. I was just teasing my Dear, no need to be “ Sorry if I may seem to be rubbing it in, ”. “ Didn't mean to be coy,” I never thought of you as being so. Had it not been the end of my productive day “ I come from the Philippines, with 1,107 islands, ” was going to be my next guess – did find that out later, when reading the comments made on your poem Mirror - “ From Quezon City, Mel. Originally though I'm from Naga City, ”.

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 2/11/2015 5:25:00 PM

“ Again, let me express my appreciation for your time and attention to my creative attempts, sire...and indicating that they do not disappoint...Much obliged...:) ” wala sa mga ito sa tingin, ( think nothing of it ) maybe another smile ? “ Ah, I put a note at the bottom of the page that the haiku was inspired by my recent Old Soul poetry readings, sire . ” I finally get it, saw it. Thank you for giving me credit for what has surely come from within you, no me, very sweet of you. “ Thank you for sharing your blog at the site. ” wala sa mga ito sa tingin my Dear. I think you might enjoy the pictorial representations along with the more colourful layouts of my stuff . Valentines - ?? xinxi ??xinxi? wo ? zi . “ Just had to read one from you while taking a lunch break, sire, (11:59 AM ) ” As always my Dear, THANK YOU for all your interest in my stuff. I can only assume Kim, that you work nights / early mornings ???

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 2/11/2015 5:24:00 PM

Hard to believe that my stuff is able to, “ was pleased to see you have a new post today ” but glad that I am able to elicit these kind of positive feelings in another human being . I always thought that I danced to a different drummer ?, sang with a different beat ?, but alas my Dear, we seem to be in step, “ I'd love to listen to ”, following the same “ rhythm! ” so, so much for being different. Isn’t it though “ Curioser and curioser... ”. “ Isn't it a pleasure both to the mind and the senses, reading pieces like this, ”. I will have to take your word for it Kim, for the only pleasure for me came with living it – moments of what once was reality and the moments derived from delving into my memories hoard. Moments “ which must have been fashioned only after a story of much love, passion, ” are the fibers woven into the tapestry of this Valentines rhyme for the Lady

William J. Jr. Atfield
Date: 2/11/2015 5:23:00 PM

As for “ and tears that were shed, has ended. ”, obviously many tears, but it may never end ???, this never ending story, four years and five months in the making . May you also know, intimately !!!, “ happier days and an even happier Valentine ”. “ more smiles under now a downcast sky from the land of thousand isles...Kim:) ” Thank you my Dear, and smiles back at you from 6,614.5 miles away and another day of overcast skies. Obviously you are a very well educated woman with a good command of the English language . Be good and take good care !!! Bill . ( B. J. “A” 2 )