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Valentine Shmalentine

Valentine Shmalentine I gave my Valentines heart to you now I have none and you have two. 1/21/2017 submitted to – Valentine Shmalentine – Poetry Contest

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Teddy Kimathi

Date: 2/1/2017 5:13:00 AM

Hahahaha!!! That couplet made my day!!! ;-D Congrats John, for your WIN with this wonderful verse!!! ;-)

Daniel Turner

Date: 1/31/2017 10:29:00 AM

Very funny, John. Congratulations on your win:) You are heartless. Lol

Afzal Nusker

Date: 1/30/2017 9:47:00 PM

Quirky, short & to the point. Congrats on your win, John.

John Lawless
Date: 1/31/2017 9:38:00 AM

...HEY.....I'm not short!!!!

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 1/30/2017 8:50:00 PM

Fair enough, but not! Congrats, John!

John Lawless
Date: 1/31/2017 9:37:00 AM

....it has been said that "all's fair in love and.....valentines day....

Maurice Rigoler

Date: 1/22/2017 10:07:00 AM

Much said in two lines, John. I will be posting my take on this silly occasion. Thanks for stopping by. Best to you. / M

John Lawless
Date: 1/31/2017 9:34:00 AM

Good to hear from you Maurice.

Jan Allison

Date: 1/21/2017 9:59:00 AM

aww great couplet John!:-) hugs jan xx

John Lawless
Date: 1/31/2017 9:33:00 AM

Well Jan, I though the "couple-ette" a worthy form for this contest...heheheee