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Valentine Memory

From a hospice bed To a special dinner date And a wet Red Rose I hold in my heart The memory of that night My Rose bush still blooms In my night garden My Rose bush exudes that night My heart is embraced A gentle rain falls Creating weepy puddles Reflective mirrors © Brenda V Northeast 6th Feb. 2012

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Date: 4/29/2012 6:18:00 AM
How lovely. Sounds like it was a very special Valentines. May your zest for life ligh your way in life. TLee
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 4/29/2012 6:24:00 AM
Thank you Terry- His memory lives on in heart, blessings, Bren
Date: 2/5/2012 10:12:00 AM
A beautiful story in haiku. Enjoyed these, Brenda. Love, Kim
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 2/7/2012 4:39:00 AM
Thank you Kim, appreciate you, blessings, Bren
Date: 2/5/2012 12:09:00 AM
Absolutely gorgeous! I like how you tell part of your memories but leave the rest open for interpretation. The last section is my favourite as it suggests much but delicately Thank you Karen
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 2/5/2012 2:19:00 AM
Thank you Karen inspiring comment, love, Brenda: )
Date: 2/4/2012 11:51:00 PM
I could never tire of such a beautiful love story especially one penned so well. A memory to be cherished. Blessings, Rhonda
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 2/5/2012 2:20:00 AM
Thank you Rhonda for such a kind comment, love and blessings, Brenda : )
Date: 2/4/2012 11:41:00 PM
All of the Haiku fit in nicely! I really enjoyed reading them this fine evening! I especially like the rose interjections, very nice! What a spectacular write my friend! Great Work!!
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Brenda Victoria Northeast
Date: 2/4/2012 11:44:00 PM
Thank you so much Russell your a very dear friend on here who supports everyone so helpfully, you are much appreciated, love, brenda : )

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