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Valentine memory

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Valentine memory

From a hospice bed
To a special dinner date
And a wet Red Rose 

I hold in my heart 
The memory of that night
My Rose bush still blooms

In my night garden
My Rose bush exudes that night 
My heart is embraced

A gentle rain falls
Creating weepy puddles 
Reflective mirrors


© Brenda V Northeast 6th Feb. 2012

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  1. Date: 4/29/2012 6:18:00 AM
    How lovely. Sounds like it was a very special Valentines. May your zest for life ligh your way in life. TLee

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 4/29/2012 6:24:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Terry- His memory lives on in heart, blessings, Bren
  1. Date: 2/5/2012 10:12:00 AM
    A beautiful story in haiku. Enjoyed these, Brenda. Love, Kim

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 2/7/2012 4:39:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Kim, appreciate you, blessings, Bren
  1. Date: 2/5/2012 12:09:00 AM
    Absolutely gorgeous! I like how you tell part of your memories but leave the rest open for interpretation. The last section is my favourite as it suggests much but delicately Thank you Karen

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 2/5/2012 2:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Karen inspiring comment, love, Brenda: )
  1. Date: 2/4/2012 11:51:00 PM
    I could never tire of such a beautiful love story especially one penned so well. A memory to be cherished. Blessings, Rhonda

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 2/5/2012 2:20:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you Rhonda for such a kind comment, love and blessings, Brenda : )
  1. Date: 2/4/2012 11:41:00 PM
    All of the Haiku fit in nicely! I really enjoyed reading them this fine evening! I especially like the rose interjections, very nice! What a spectacular write my friend! Great Work!!

    Northeast Avatar Brenda Victoria Northeast
    Date: 2/4/2012 11:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thank you so much Russell your a very dear friend on here who supports everyone so helpfully, you are much appreciated, love, brenda : )