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Valentine

My life with you is like the ocean in waves it comes and goes And just below the surface love is deeper than we know Not once have I forgotten just where we began Or how my love still grows with each touch of your hand As the many years have passed our love has seen its trials But I have seen it travel the distance of many many miles Through every raging storm of life and all that we have seen The magic of your love has safely carried me Here before you now I stand to tell you how I feel With all that is within me I know this love is real So this year for Valentine’s Day I have only this to ask Will you be my Valentine and let this love forever last? *Dedicated with love to my wonderful husband, David. Copyright © 2010 Lena “Lolita” Townsend **for Deborah's "Who Love's Ya Baby?" contest

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Date: 2/8/2011 8:24:00 PM
Great rhyming couplets here that collectively convey a lovely message.
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Date: 1/23/2010 12:42:00 PM
This is a cool valentine you've given to your baby Lolita. When he reads this a night on the town, I bet is in order. Smile, Love, Moses
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Date: 1/22/2010 11:57:00 PM
Thank you for your welcome blog comments today Lena.Rgds Brian
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Date: 1/21/2010 12:26:00 PM
Oh, sorry I missed this one. It's so very nice, Lolita. I love that name. Reminds me of some songs I grew up with (Lola) and a musical I once saw in which i believe one of the characters was named Lola or Lolita. Glad I got to see your entry finally! LUv, andrea
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Date: 1/15/2010 9:20:00 PM
An amazing write from an amazing writer. Your heart speaks volumes Lolita. Best Wishes Always, Bill
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Date: 1/10/2010 2:12:00 PM
What a great dedication to a loved one.I posted a new poem i think you will like.
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Date: 1/9/2010 8:47:00 AM
What a great source of inspiration David is for you, Lolita! You are both lucky to have each other as you face the storms throughout your life together. The reader can really feel the love in your heart here. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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