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Vale of Tears

She walks along an avenue some call the Vale of Tears. Her agonies and sorrows brew in eyes that vail her tears. She whiles alone, her gaze unmet, behind a veil of tears. But can she flee from sadness, yet with no avail of tears? In time, the Rue of No Regrets will countervail her tears. Vale: valley Vail: let sink Veil: something that conceals Avail of: use to one’s advantage Countervail: offset, counteract Inspired by poems of KC

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 2/14/2013 8:54:00 PM
Terry , Stopping by with sincere thanks for your kind comments. It is appreciated more than words or can say... Wishing you the best Valentine's Day YET! Always & Forever :-) LINDA .
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Date: 1/17/2013 11:54:00 PM
I enjoyed this one for its cleverness. I don't think there is anything you could write that I wouldn't like,
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Date: 1/7/2013 5:38:00 PM
Terry; This is really good. Great rhyme. Terry, you didn't read the whole poem Of A Man Stood. You only read part of it. I was trying to rewrite it. My computer messd up. I just put it back. I still had to write a lot more. Sorry. Maybe tomorrow I'll have part III. Lucilla
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Date: 12/21/2012 3:23:00 AM
great use of the words mate ...don
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Date: 12/8/2012 8:34:00 PM
I like your rhyme, Terry,,,, thank you for reading my Sweet Ecstasy ;}
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Date: 12/2/2012 5:46:00 PM
Vail, vail, vail, and vail.
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Date: 11/22/2012 9:07:00 AM
I really like the play on words in this one. Thanks for posting this one! and a happy thanksgiving day to you.
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Date: 11/19/2012 9:15:00 AM
So nice!
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Date: 11/19/2012 3:50:00 AM
I just stopped by to read this beautiful poem again and add it to my favorites.
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Date: 11/19/2012 3:45:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your poem Terry..Its nice for drops of dew to shed from tears... LOVE IT
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Date: 11/18/2012 12:37:00 PM
wonderful write, my friend - love the clever play on words
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Date: 11/18/2012 8:31:00 AM
Dear Terry - I hope I'm not being presumptious in appreciating this poem on a highly personal level. If I'm not, thank you, from my boulevard of broken dreams. (glad you didn't use that one). If I am totally self-centered in my little mind, I love it anyway. I think you've hit the mark, my friend. Terry - you make my heart sing! love, Kathy
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Date: 11/18/2012 8:10:00 AM
great write Terry ...love all those vails....the rue of no regrets...love it
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Date: 11/17/2012 7:37:00 PM
So melancholy but so touching. Enjoyed this Terry. Sherese
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Date: 11/16/2012 11:35:00 AM
A touching poem, well written Terry. - Hope your weekend will be fine. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 11/16/2012 5:57:00 AM
great write Terry
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Date: 11/15/2012 1:04:00 PM
graceful sorrow beautifully stated... I think I have commented on this before...still love it..
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Date: 11/15/2012 10:19:00 AM
I love the word play with the different spellings in alternate lines and the way you tied them altogether. Excellent.
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Date: 11/14/2012 2:48:00 PM
this is clever poetry Terry, and flows like tears, it is so good...
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Date: 11/14/2012 1:25:00 PM
I like this one with the play on words..Sara
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Date: 11/13/2012 6:08:00 PM
such a creative piece of writing! i love how beautifully you've woven all the forms of "vale" into your poem. great job!
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Date: 11/13/2012 5:46:00 PM
Really great how you utililzed the words and definitions to convey complex thought, simply devine!
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Date: 11/13/2012 8:25:00 AM
Positively refreshing! I love it when intelligence shines through poetry...it makes me happy.
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Date: 11/13/2012 7:24:00 AM
Nice poetry, enjoyed your expressive poetry this morning Terry. Take good care, and God bless, Cindy
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