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For: Vanish, Voyage, Veiled, Vagabond Words - Poetry Contest
Sponsor: Constance La France
The vagabond hears a nomad's song, his footsteps follow the wind, seeking sweet freedom in the fire of wanderlust, burning chains that would keep him bound in the shadows of doubt; under starlit sky and in morning light the traveller finds solitary refuge. on the neverending road.

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Date: 4/7/2024 3:03:00 PM
Chetta, congratulations on your win in my contest with this splendid poem, hugs
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Chetta Achara
Date: 4/7/2024 3:08:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/29/2024 8:43:00 PM
This is a beautiful poem that seems to highlight freedom of individuality. "the traveler finds solitary refuge" gives me peace of mind. Good luck with the contest.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/30/2024 3:12:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/29/2024 3:24:00 PM
ah, the never ending road and the pursuit of freedom describes the vagabond so well. I liked the image of 'burning chains' and 'footsteps following the wind.' You've captured the essence of one who seeks wanderlust. Best wishes with the contest, Sara
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/30/2024 3:12:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/29/2024 3:17:00 PM
Lovely wanderer you captured the space in time wow many blessings enjoyed your work.
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/30/2024 3:11:00 PM
Thank you.
Date: 3/29/2024 9:28:00 AM
Hello Chetta, I liked how you captured the restless spirit of the wanderer, yearning for freedom and liberation from earthly constraints. I also liked how your scenes lay out the nomadic journey, where each step is a pursuit of self-discovery amidst the vast expanse of the world. Through your words, I feel the exhilaration of breaking free from the chains of doubt and embracing the boundless possibilities of the open road. Truly inspiring. - Blessings, Daniel
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Chetta Achara
Date: 3/29/2024 9:56:00 AM
Thank you. Your words of encouragement for me to continue my journey of poetry.

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