Vacation

The bluest blue The whitest white An ocean view that gives delight The raging winds The crashing waves Yet only a true sailor braves The shining sun The sky of blue Your skin turns a red hue The sandy beach The palm trees bend A vacation that will never end.

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Ralph Sergi

Date: 4/9/2017 10:41:00 PM

I felt a special warmth from your beach poem. now I can really relate to Florida. Great Write!

Skat A

Date: 5/19/2016 2:42:00 PM

Janet, creative and well done. Thank you for sharing. **SKAT**

Judy Konos

Date: 8/25/2015 7:40:00 AM

If anyone could say this better I would certainly like to read it! BEAUTIFUL

Poesy Relish

Date: 5/10/2015 12:34:00 AM

Wow that would be perfect... hope you had a wonderful time Janet.. lov,nad

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 4/14/2015 9:44:00 AM

A wonderful beach poem and i enjoyd the mention of palm trees that we too have here on Dar beaches, it seems like God made them to be natural shades. U have sketched the imagery in attractive poetic way. Nice to read u again.

Daisy Marie Yant

Date: 4/8/2015 4:33:00 PM

Hi there! So that is where you have been. Glad you enjoyed. Much Love

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 4/1/2015 6:02:00 AM

wowowoow! I wanna be there too.. :)! love the effect of your line you place me on the scene.. :)!

Janet Eaton
Date: 4/1/2015 6:29:00 AM

Thank you Olive for your kind words. It was a great vacation:)

Emile Pinet

Date: 3/26/2015 8:22:00 AM

Very well expressed with a picturesque vision of a tropical vacation under the sun. Emile. #7

Janet Eaton
Date: 3/26/2015 8:32:00 AM

Thank you Emile for such wonderful comments and for the 7:)

Fatima Nusairat

Date: 3/24/2015 8:38:00 PM

Beautifully written Janet :) thank you for visiting my page and for the nice comment Appreciated

Janet Eaton
Date: 3/25/2015 5:40:00 AM

Thank you

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/24/2015 2:14:00 PM

a cute poem. I was expecting a joke about a sunburn at the end. But it turned into the endless vacation. I would love one of those!!

Janet Eaton
Date: 3/24/2015 2:40:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, I guess I could have ended with my sunburned feet that have blisters all over them, but I liked the endless vacation better, less painful:) It was an amazing experience. Janet:)