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Vacation

Fourth of July meant summer vacation road trips Sun and fun amusement parks and the beach Flip flops and freckles carefree slow days like pouring cold honey Fast and forever friends were found around the corner New discoveries found due to a natural curiosity Sea Shells, sea creatures and sand castles young adventurers like westward homesteaders We had life by the tail, no fear we new infinity We believed we were untouchable This little island was our haven and we explored like we were owners Palm trees and tall grass was different than our everday tall oaks at home Vacation was once per year no time to stop for necessities Blistering sun on tender fair skin Marinate my flesh in sunscreen Daddy would laugh and play like he was a king Mama didn't seem to mind as much on vacation our summer fling

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Date: 4/27/2011 1:50:00 PM
Hey Gilrfriend where have you been? XXX missed you. this poem makes me want to go on vacation. That's the only place i can make a fool of meself.
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Date: 4/26/2011 7:21:00 AM
Hi Doris. This is a very fun type of vacation with exploring with family and marinating in sunscreeen. I like your free verse form! And the fact that you felt as tho you were untouchable makes the sense of seclusion come alive. If this is for a contest, best of luck! Sick of the rain in OHIO, Gwendolen
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Date: 4/26/2011 2:43:00 AM
Good to see your good memories Doris we need these to anchor us as we journey on in life!
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Date: 4/18/2011 9:32:00 AM
I live near the beach and I don't go nearly enough. This poems makes me want to start going. Nice!
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Date: 4/17/2011 9:13:00 PM
Doris, thanks for the only trip I may get to the beach this year. You make me lonely for everything but the sand and tourists. Charles
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Date: 4/17/2011 2:00:00 PM
This was a great one. I like the way you describe a time when families play together and actually enjoyed being together. This was a nice read.
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Date: 4/16/2011 3:35:00 PM
Keep working on it..Interesting point of view..Sara
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Date: 4/15/2011 8:35:00 PM
You succeeded in portraying your feelings of freedom and indestructability and joy at vacation time..enjoyed, Doris
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Date: 4/15/2011 6:35:00 PM
Doris, this is full of nostalgia. I can tell that it was one of the best times of your life, and done or not, it is looking GREAT.
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Date: 4/15/2011 7:07:00 AM
At the time of reading your comment, it's 3.06 pm here, Doris : )
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Date: 4/14/2011 5:50:00 PM
ice pen pictureof the family vacation, Doris
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Date: 4/14/2011 2:55:00 PM
Had to giggle at "marinating" your skin in sun lotion, Doris. When I was growing up, we took family vacations that are much like the one you describe here. A joy to read! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 4/14/2011 8:50:00 AM
July 4th weekend is also our family vacation date....love this write. Jeff
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Date: 4/12/2011 2:35:00 PM
Doris this one took me back in time, fond memories. this was a great piece you wrote.
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Date: 4/12/2011 12:46:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your excellent poetry today Doris. Wishing you a wonderful day filled with inspiration. Love, Carol
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Date: 4/12/2011 8:26:00 AM
LOL - Hope you enjoy being a great aunt : ) No, I don't have any kids
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Date: 4/12/2011 8:10:00 AM
it's summer here in our country and your breezy piece livens me up. doris.. a lovely sacene you so portray! :) huggs, nette
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Date: 4/12/2011 8:10:00 AM
Sounds like a great time was had by all : ) I'm not sure when you sent your message, Doris - I've only just seen it - but it is daytime here at the moment. It's 16.09 at this precise moment. I'm in England
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