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Vacant House


I can feel something is watching 
me behind
Its stare is freezing my spine
I try to lift my foot, yet no 
movement shown
I open my mouth and scream, not 
even a hush moaned

It darkens the room, I can feel
It’s not in any shape of real
Is that a ghost?
Or I just hate this place too much 
I feel worst?

This abstract in a dark-shade-I-
Reaching me and I can’t defy
Sweeping the wall, it crawls 
Releasing its rage, it growls

I still cannot move and I’m muted
My friend pokes me waken to go in 
for my dare
A vacant house that refuses to be 
I swear I wouldn't want to through 
the same nightmare

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  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:57:00 AM
    To answer your question I do like Eminem, actually. He has a quite very powerful lyrics, and unlike most rappers, you can tell right off the bat that he's the one rapping. Glad to meet another Linkin Park fan as well! I hardly listen to them anymore and have kinda got into more relaxing laid back music... but it's fun to reminisce! After they are the ones that inspired me in the first place, to start writing...

  1. Date: 4/13/2013 12:08:00 PM
    Splendid work here,Dinda:) I`ve always been drawn towards spooky stuff..don`t why really,coz it scares the heck out me everytime! Good one dear Dinda.Hugs and Love,Arild

  1. Date: 4/12/2013 4:13:00 AM
    I think we've all had creepy, abandoned houses around the block, that simply are too eerie to dare stepping inside. Fear is a strange thing, and sometimes hard to tell if it's rational or irrational. Always use the buddy system, haha... good work!

  1. Date: 4/9/2013 2:09:00 PM
    Dark, yet wondrous. I am truly pleased with the tone of this piece. Strong & terrific job!

  1. Date: 4/8/2013 3:22:00 PM
    Like a scene from a scary movie Dinda. Full of suspense line to line, nice one - James :)

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 12:38:00 PM
    Dinda, your poem had me at grip, while you described and gave good imagery with feeling on the vacant house and eerie feeling that someone was watching you... gave me goosebumps. love the poem... . Enjoyed~ Thank you for sharing your poem. Have yourself a good one...Linda

  1. Date: 4/7/2013 7:25:00 AM
    Dinda a scary write but well written...David

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 1:59:00 PM
    A well written poem Dinda ..... hope it's a fantasy. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 4/6/2013 11:19:00 AM
    I know that james wrote something for me.It was a long time ago.I told him to enter it in the contest and he got a well deserved 1st place.thank you.all my poems are from my thoughts.