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Inspiration is stymied by these walls Deeper into a depression she falls All she needs to do is go outside And on a unicorn she will glide The splendor below is God’s great gift And it feels so free to be adrift Meadow flowers shine in rainbow hues A lazy dog is taking a snooze Emerald forests make her smile Something she hasn’t done for a while Puffy clouds above release her muse Imagination does transfuse The “no vacancy” sign is gone God’s gifts give impetus to write on *For Diane Christian’s “Inspiration” contest

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Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/20/2014 11:55:00 AM

This poem is fantastic!!! A7 Loved it!!

Arthur Vaso

Date: 4/20/2014 11:55:00 AM

Ops forgot to fill in the rating, done!

Joe Maverick

Date: 11/11/2012 12:35:00 AM

Enjoyed the lushness of this dear Carolyn.. You have brightenend my page this morning.."

Audrey Haick

Date: 6/22/2012 5:25:00 PM

I love this, Seafaress! So true..just a little while out doors and you're sure to find your muse. Glad to be reading your wonderful works again dear friend. Much love, Annalise

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/17/2012 6:27:00 PM

Great descriptive contest entry..Good luck in the contest...Sara

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 6/17/2012 5:17:00 AM

Inspiration is ultimately all about God's gifts, well said. ..:) Jag

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 6/15/2012 4:51:00 AM

This is inspirational indeed and absolutely wonderful Sweet lady,Re your comment on my favourite Devonshire.. I do believe all i've written..You are all that special for who you are..and more..big hugs.How are you lately?

Daver Austin

Date: 6/14/2012 2:34:00 PM

Great ride on that unicorn. Keep on a riding and a writing my dear friend. Love, daver

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 6/14/2012 2:27:00 PM

Nice one...beautiful in fact. I could fly away with you in my mind...to that emerald forest. Love you. Hope you are feeling ok at least.

David Williams

Date: 6/11/2012 1:42:00 AM

Carolyn congrats on your win..David

Joe Maverick

Date: 6/10/2012 11:38:00 AM

Can really feel the inspiration in this write Carolyn; "well penned and may it score high in that contest..!

Ralph Taylor

Date: 6/8/2012 6:39:00 PM

Congrats, Carolyn. Outstanding. Nice going. hugs, Ralph

Painted Hunter

Date: 6/8/2012 12:19:00 PM

This is great, Carolyn. Congrats!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/8/2012 11:50:00 AM

Congratulations on your Inspiration poem win Carolyn. Love, Carol

Jack Horne

Date: 6/8/2012 11:24:00 AM

Lovely write, my friend - so glad the muse returned : )

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 6/8/2012 9:16:00 AM

Such little things we need to make the day a happy one. All are wrapped up in your words Carolyn; we certainly are blessed! Luv, Elizabeth

Diane Christian

Date: 6/8/2012 4:57:00 AM

congratualtions and thanks for supporting my contest God bless from diane

Robert Ball

Date: 6/6/2012 5:34:00 PM

Hi, how is my friend doing?My health has stabilized and the Father has blessed this sinner agin, although sinning is less these days, I hope your health isbetter you are in my prayersalong with the prayers from mywife, god bless. bob

Kathryn Collins

Date: 6/6/2012 1:16:00 PM

Carolyn You brought me to blue sky and back again to the green green grass. Thank you. Kathy

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/5/2012 2:04:00 PM

Carolyn....your poem come like crystal pearls on a string today !!!! - Luck to you in contest! - oxox Anne-Lise

Russell Sivey

Date: 6/5/2012 12:16:00 PM

This poem is quite the inspiration! I really enjoyed the cleverness behind this write! What a beautiful poem you have written my good friend! I just love your piece of art and ingenious write! Great Work!!