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For the Unadorned, Utopia ,Utterly, Uplifting Poetry Contest of Constance La France

A note to anyone trying my List Contest: This is another example of how to do a list poem in the way I have adapted it: Use rhyming couplets and make sure your ONE word title is used at least in line one of every couplet. In the case of my contest going on right now, the limit for couplets is between 3 to 10 (using no more than 20 lines total for your contest entry). My poem below goes over that limit.

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"The best thing I can say about me is that I am utterly what you see." by author of this poem Utterly in love with writing I have been since my muse first visited and I picked up her pen. Utterly adoring of family and friends I am. Though far from most of them, I call to chat as often as I can. Utterly content am I to also be alone. I have a lot of interests I engage in on my own. I’m utterly in awe of books, for like a favorite friend, a good book I will stay with until the very end. I’m utterly delighted by small pleasures such as food. Popcorn and movies put me in a happy mood. I’m utterly nostalgic when I’m thinking of my kin and friends deceased for whom I have great love. I’m utterly impressed by those who have great wit but not so pleased, when given not a thing to do, I am forced to sit. I’m utterly annoyed too by people who are mean and small-minded people who with jealousy are green. Most utterly I’m sickened by horrific crimes. Murder, rape, domestic violence: the number of them climbs. Utterly overwhelmed by woe I sometimes feel. For things once on my bucket list I no more have great zeal. However, I stay utterly thankful to the Lord knowing when I die, my health will be restored. I utterly admire folks who show a happy face like those with burdens helping others, living life with grace. Utterly with hope I live. I need not dwell on strife with all the wondrous things that I was blessed with in my life

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Date: 4/7/2024 3:13:00 PM
Andrea, congratulations on your win in my contest with this outstanding poem, I like the quote too, hugs
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Date: 3/28/2024 2:10:00 PM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest, Andrea :) - Have a lovely Easter :) - hugs
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Date: 3/26/2024 10:45:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. An "Utterly" wonderful write/quote. Love It.... Enjoy your day/win..............
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Date: 3/26/2024 7:12:00 AM
Your couplet list is exceptional Andrea. I utterly believe every word and especially enjoyed the last two couplets Congratulations! :)
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Date: 3/20/2024 5:34:00 AM
I love your positivity, Andrea, you have been my inspiration in many ways:)
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/20/2024 6:30:00 AM
thanks so much
Date: 3/19/2024 10:44:00 AM
Nice way to list utterly items in a great poem. You have covered entire aspect of likes and dislikes in life.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/19/2024 1:13:00 PM
thanks, and that was my goal.
Date: 3/19/2024 8:39:00 AM
Andrea, this poem is a lot of fun. By seeing how you use the same word to emphasize what is important to you, we get an insight into you as an individual. I like all the good things that are part of you. BTW, your instructions at the beginning are very clear!
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/19/2024 1:12:00 PM
good, about my instructions. I am hoping anyone who did my contest perhaps incorrectly will see this example and wise up before it's too late for edits. I am really enjoying this way of doing list poems!
Date: 3/19/2024 7:21:00 AM
Dear Andrea, This is an utterly heartfelt reflection on life's varied changes, revealing your deep appreciation for the simple joys and profound sorrows that shape our existence. I loved how your words are filled with sincerity; each line is a testament to the depth of your emotions and experiences. I liked that you invited us to embrace the richness of life in all its facets, from love and laughter to pain and perseverance. It's a beautiful reminder to cherish every moment and find solace in gratitude. Andrea, a touching glimpse into your world. - Blessings, Daniel
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/19/2024 1:13:00 PM
thanks so much, Daniel.
Date: 3/19/2024 5:00:00 AM
Dear sweet andrea you make this form look so easy to do, i must admit im not always into repetitive words in a poem but your list poems truly the flow makes it so catchy and lyrical, and so captivating. I resonate with alot of your lines, especially love for books and the first lines that hit, they really are my thoughts too but what hit the strongest is “ I’m utterly annoyed too by people who are mean and small-minded people who with jealousy are green.” I know too many of them in real life. Excellent list poem. Now youv inspired me to do utterly but im not sure hah. Lets see. Best wishes for the contest sweet andrea
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 3/19/2024 1:14:00 PM
Thanks, Ink. For me it's very easy. I love forms for rhyme. So you have not done the U word contest yet?

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