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Utopia's Slippery Slope Continuum

Utopia's Slippery Slope Continuum Trees of pink snow bloom by the lake when Spring is full Young warriors dream ... Old warriors walk Through dreamless trees of concrete Modernization 3.8.2017©deborah burch

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Jannie Breedt

Date: 4/18/2017 2:39:00 PM

Hi Deborah. Gee what a contrast in two haiku and how it washed my brain ha ha. I dig it. Wonderful. Many hugs Jannie

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/8/2017 2:43:00 AM

Deborah. Congratulations. This is very meaningful. Short, bittersweet and slippery. Kai

Teddy Kimathi

Date: 4/7/2017 8:49:00 AM

Finely placed words..... Congrats Deborah, for your placement in the contest!! ;-)

Mark Martin

Date: 4/5/2017 8:40:00 AM

Nice double-haiku Deborah! Congratulations! :-)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 4/4/2017 12:08:00 PM

Congratulations Deborah and thanks for taking part. Your poem is so short and yet/thus (?) so awesome. Good stuff, Kai

Meenakshi Raina

Date: 4/3/2017 2:33:00 PM

Congratulations on your win!

Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/3/2017 8:41:00 AM

A powerful contrast here, Deborah. Congrats on your win! Give me the pink snow! Janice

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/24/2017 9:21:00 AM

I like the contrast. Well done Deborah.

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/25/2017 6:38:00 PM

Thank you Richard!! Very much!! :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/21/2017 5:42:00 PM

wow, what a clever wAY to do that challenge. I'm impressed!

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/21/2017 6:25:00 PM

Andy you have no idea how much your words mean to mean!! :) thank you my friend! Love you bunches!!

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/21/2017 4:56:00 PM

Interesting haiku here! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/21/2017 6:25:00 PM

Thank you kindly Matthew!:)

Manoj Kumar

Date: 3/21/2017 1:55:00 AM

Great work Deborah. Beautiful...... Keep writing

Deborah Burch
Date: 3/21/2017 6:27:00 PM

Thank you so much Manjo!! :) blessings to you my friend. Deb