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...dedicated to all my Soup brothers and sisters A lady at a window writing, measuring her words with strict precision. She takes a sip of tea as if to fuel her imagination. Memories go drifting by - a brother playing basketball, the softness of a springtime rain, the anger of an autumn sky, a flash, and thunder rumbling. Smells and sounds, grist to her mill. Nothing spoils her view until her best attempt is done. Still dissatisfied she tweaks and fiddles, substitutes a weak word for a stronger one. At last content she sets aside her pen. Yes, they will know her now, know the beauty of her mind, and know that she will always do her utmost.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 6/1/2012 6:12:00 AM
As always your words are beautiful and so full of meaning Keith. A pleasure to read your poetry again today. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/31/2012 4:05:00 PM
i love the title and the dedication. i feel honored to possibly be among the writers you may have had in mind when writing this. i think we all "tweak and fiddle" (what a wonderful phrase!) but very few of us achieve what you are able to do, seemingly without effort.
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Date: 5/31/2012 2:02:00 PM
Like this one very much... I can definitely identify with this! "substitutes a weak word / for a stronger one" is a beautiful phrase. Fabulous. Annie x
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Date: 5/31/2012 1:09:00 PM
hi Keith thanks for your kind comments on ym poem secret crush, it is nice to be friends, I dont think my friend feels the same as me but it is amazing How God brings things together, my friend stoped talking to me for about 2 months but I forgive a s I know they were still ehaling froma painfull split last year with some one, so I unbderstand in some ways why he would be wary. LOL, I also like your poem, it is nice sounds abit like me wriitng witha cup of tea LOl take care my friend and God bless you
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Date: 5/31/2012 1:00:00 PM
Love it!Very nice!
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