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You did not ever want me Cast me aside no use for me I was meant for a summer kiss But, after that you did not want this Dragged me after you but then let go Toss me back and forth, to and fro In the aftermath what do I have left my sweet? In this game of hide and seek No one’s here to light the candle anymore Broken, I’m left scattered across the floor No one here to light this way An infinite space between the night and day. Cold fingers without your hand to keep warm Inside my heart I think I have a worm Inside of me the parasite I host The mirror asks, what’s it like to be a ghost?

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 11/3/2010 11:47:00 AM
So much sadness in this one Madison but I love your Couplets ;)
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Date: 11/3/2010 7:25:00 AM
Wow! An excellent description of loneliness and longing, Madison. So many great lines convey your feeling well, and the last couplet is chilling. Great work! Love, Carolyn
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Date: 10/29/2010 1:02:00 PM
Nicely written poem about a sad situation. Keep on keeping on.
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Date: 10/28/2010 12:17:00 PM
I am just starting to read today and I must say there are some exceptional poems posted. Glad yours was included in my reading today Madison. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/27/2010 11:33:00 PM
Madison, this one makes me want to weep! Excellent emotional response for a work of this sort. Hope that this is an observation and not a real cry of pain. Well Done, dear Lady. Sorry to have been slow getting back to you but my health took a downturn and I was in hospital again for a few days. Thanks for your kind words on my stuff. And yes, I do live in Utah. Love, Will
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Date: 10/27/2010 9:07:00 PM
a lot of thought throughout! nice poem
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