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us then

as i look down the hallway
 i secretly hope he will come my way
  but i know he wont
    he never does
     we never talk anymore
      we never steal glances
        in the middle of class
         not anymore
           we used to say someday
             we will be married....
               now i guess he forgot about all that
                 just another day,
                   with tears streaming down my face
                      screaming for someones embrace
                        and always coming up empty

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  1. Date: 12/9/2010 5:47:00 PM
    I guess I missed this little gem you have written, most here on Soup can relate to this at one tome of there lives. A well constructed piece. No love that's not about my wife, its an example of me going back to a different time and relationship, and writing from their. Sorry your still having the "block". But rest assure my dear it shall pass, you just can't force it. Hope your well my dear poet friend . With love Michael

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 4:20:00 PM
    Nice lay out with imkpressive thoughts on us then, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 11/22/2010 1:51:00 PM
    sad but a very good write,..p.d.