Us

"Us" I think that we should go We sink in afterglow My job is to reach you They rob, if they just knew Some teach so we may learn Some Preach so we won't burn Only then can we Live And that's when all hearts give written 6-30-20

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/16/2020 1:48:00 PM

Profound words for the secret to life beautifully penned Eric. Congratulations on your win! Blessings :)

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/12/2020 4:19:00 AM

Profoundly written, Eric, my compliments for your righteous efforts and for your placement truly, my friend, blessings! -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William

Joseph May

Date: 7/11/2020 5:24:00 PM

ery nicely written Eric, Congrats on your win

Robert Lindley

Date: 7/5/2020 9:37:00 AM

Eight verses that speak truly of life and this world we all must endure in or brief span. Where mankind must reach to ever find Light and Truth. A fav.. God bless...

Silent One

Date: 7/4/2020 4:08:00 PM

Everyone has s role... Some do it, some don't.. such is humanity... Enjoyed your words..

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/2/2020 9:22:00 AM

Nicely executed my friend...best wishes...^WW^ :o)

Eric Boddie
Date: 7/2/2020 9:27:00 AM

thank you ww....i just tell it as i see it....and i have tried to comment on one of your poems but it keeps giving me an error message saying the page has moved or something....