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Urban Warfare

Urban Warfare Knock Knock, tick tocks the clock, post traumatic syndrome head trauma shock. Glock Glock, click pop weapon stock, three dimensional residential sniper kill shot on lock. Hippity Hop, bee bop the music stops, scattered brats panic attack, raiding cops. Ding Dong, ping pong ball bounce bops, sad sadistic, unrealistic, urban firearm goes pop, pop, pop!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/7/2016 3:25:00 AM
This was really different, Damien. It had such a bouncy rhythm for what is quite the disturbing topic. I wasn't sure if I was reading Dr. Seuss ... or Stephen King. Very cool poem!
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Date: 2/25/2016 4:57:00 PM
Brilliant! Mark was right your simplistic language interspersed with the unfolding tragedy, couldn't of said it better myself!
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Damien Knight
Date: 2/29/2016 12:28:00 AM
Not sure if its brilliant but thanks for the vote of confidence
Date: 2/25/2016 7:43:00 AM
Very dramatic write, the simplistic language used interspersed with the unfolding tragedy,....well done
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Damien Knight
Date: 2/25/2016 4:54:00 PM
Thank you very much Mark

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