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Urban Commuter Scents and Sensibility

Ten thousand eyes will each day pass but not a single one will see, because the folly of their hubris hides the harsh reality, and when they walk past homeless people posted prone in poverty, cold cloaked, they are invisible. Ten thousand ears will each day pass but not a single one will hear any proper prayers of the sullen souls that live their lives in fear. And so they sing their psalms in silence hoping angels will appear, their sadness semi-visible. Ten thousand nostrils will each day pass turned up and they’ll all detect the foul fragrance from a stumbling bum with bubble bath neglect. And yet their greatest fears are fostered from his foreign dialect. So sobering, so risible. Five thousand hearts will each day pass but not a single one will feel for the burdens borne by a beggar with war wounds that will not heal. Still they will paint themselves as patriots, American, genteel. One Nation, indivisible. Submitted: August 14, 2020 Tail Rhyme Stanza Poetry Contest Sponsored by Emile Pinet "N/A" -- August 26, 2020

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Date: 10/1/2020 11:26:00 AM
This is an exceptional poem. Congratulations.
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Eric Cohen
Date: 10/1/2020 11:52:00 AM
Gary, thanks for reading and the kind comment. I enjoy your poems here.
Date: 10/1/2020 8:50:00 AM
It's good to remember that each one is a beating heart with fears and needs and a soul. Well spoken Eric, congrats.
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Date: 10/1/2020 7:25:00 AM
An excellent write Eric, congrats on a top win!
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Eric Cohen
Date: 10/1/2020 10:04:00 AM
Thanks, John. I appreciate the consideration.
Date: 8/16/2020 3:27:00 PM
wow, very powerful pen, Eric. quite the tail rhymes!
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Date: 8/15/2020 7:33:00 AM
You're a very clever poet. Like your fun play with alliteration amongst a sobering message. The rhyme stronger, more daring than most.
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Eric Cohen
Date: 8/15/2020 12:03:00 PM
Thanks, Sigrid. Greatly appreciate your visit and comments. I guess I dripped some acid on this one. I've read through several of your awesome poems and will leave some comments. You are on another level (in a good way).

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