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Ur Birthday

Like the sun’s rays You have shined the brightest Like the seed of a shoot You have grown for the greater purpose Like the years you have to go You stand out in ur uniqueness Like the praise of a song You have always stood for what you have believed in And now you have repead what u have sown So I ask, What use is friendship? When were filled with bitterness What use is a smile? When there is no flower to assist its welcoming What use is a hug? When our skins barely touch and our hearts remain stone What use is a tear for a hurt soul? When our minds care only for ourselves But what use is a girl like you for me, Everything your my best, ur my buddy!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 9/5/2008 9:10:00 AM
I like the flow of this poem. The rhetorical questions really give it a special spark. The narrative flow is right on point for the type of reality poem. Great job! ~Joseph
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