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Ups and Downs

At the beginning it is slow Speeding up Like the fastest fighter jet ever Faster Faster Screaming Twisting Turning Flying Soaring Endless ups and downs Anticipation of an end Finally the ends has come Why don’t we give it another go

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Skat A

Date: 1/23/2016 9:21:00 PM

HUFFERFISH:) Congratulations on having your poem featured in the soups, Home Page. ~SKAT~

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/14/2015 11:22:00 PM

HUFFERFISH, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/14/2015 2:18:00 PM

Hi Hufferfish, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 (which is the highest score you can get or receive)! Pandita

Skat A

Date: 12/14/2015 11:34:00 AM

Hi Hufferfish, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT