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Upon This Wall - First Draft

Upon this wall so tall, I simply scrawl: before I came, no words showed here at all!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023


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Suzette Richards
Date: 5/6/2023 11:01:00 PM
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Congratulations, Andrea, on your 3rd place win in my GRAFFITI contest with this verse. Yes, some people can't resist a blank space or just being at peace. Regards, Suzette
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 5/6/2023 7:25:00 PM
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Spoken clearly, plainly and with effect! Congratulations, Andrea!
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Linda Alice Fowler
Date: 5/6/2023 1:02:00 PM
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I like it Andrea. Simple and profound. :) Congratulations on your win! :)
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Paul Callus
Date: 4/19/2023 1:43:00 PM
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What struck me most is the 2nd line: "before I came, no words showed here at all!" It only takes one person to start scribbling/spraying on a 'virgin' wall, and in no time at all, others join in until that wall becomes full of graffiti. ~ You came up with a good idea, Andrea! Regards // paul
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Karen Croft
Date: 4/16/2023 2:34:00 AM
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Enjoyed. Have a great weekend.
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Di11y Da11y
Date: 4/15/2023 11:50:00 PM
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I enjoyed this one :)
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 4/15/2023 9:14:00 PM
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Like it! I saw grafitti today on an overpass. Wondering how it was done…way up there!
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Yann Rolland
Date: 4/15/2023 7:23:00 PM
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very enjoyable" graffitis" have a sweet sunday
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Joe Dimino
Date: 4/15/2023 6:49:00 PM
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Like my home, every wall is overloaded with art. Well said!
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Joyce Faure
Date: 4/15/2023 12:52:00 PM
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Enjoyed!
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Gary Radice
Date: 4/15/2023 12:21:00 PM
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This made me smile Andrea. As I'm the first to comment here then it applies to me too. :) Cheers - Gary
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