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Upon the Moor

Upon The Moor I dreamed I'd written a moonlit sonnet As I danced across the misty moor. Lavender heather grew dense upon it, Serving as a carpet on a bare floor. Then a lark on wing, passed over my head. That's when I began to fervently pray, "God, if I am still asleep in my bed, Please do not allow me to wake this day. My life is burdened with sorrow and pain. Only by dreams am I ever set free. I don't mind having to sleep in the rain, For I know You always watch over me." I woke bathed in dew, lying on heather. On my breast there rested a lark's feather.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 10/23/2015 6:42:00 AM
Fabulous sonnet. So smooth. Well penned.
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/23/2015 7:38:00 AM
Thanks, Scott. I appreciate your kind comments.
Date: 10/21/2015 8:41:00 AM
Lin, the uplifting feel of this poem.. love the imagery... =`)~Olive Eloisa
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/21/2015 8:53:00 AM
Hi, Olive. Merci for your 'uplifting' remarks. Thanks for reading.
Date: 10/21/2015 6:16:00 AM
- A gem, Lin !!!! - Love it !!! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/21/2015 8:50:00 AM
g'morning, Anne Lise. Thank you for the kind comments.
Date: 10/20/2015 9:55:00 PM
Exceptional sonnet my friend! Super 7 on this jewel... A7
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Lin Lane
Date: 10/20/2015 11:25:00 PM
Your comment and 7 are much appreciated, Robert. Thanks for reading this one.

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