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Upon His Blameless Feet

Glass and fractured imaginings are trite Upon his blameless feet Even as he dance and play about them Toxic and perilous smoke are authority Outside his naive lungs While he freely breathes to ensure laughter Blood sprinkles and routine metal shards Within his innocent hands Presently, as he claps to the street’s tune Mordant activities be forever present Before his youthful eyes Just before the gleams therein make hearts sway Remarkable is… Miraculous is… Wondrous is… The resilience and spirit of youth

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Date: 11/5/2014 5:27:00 PM
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Date: 6/23/2010 11:41:00 AM
This is still one of my favorite poems written by you Mark. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/6/2009 10:54:00 AM
I am reading my favorite poems today and just wanted to let you know this is still a favorite to me Mark. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/17/2009 2:22:00 PM
This is fantastic, Mark. Wonderful form. My favorite line: "Mordant activities be forever present Before his youthful eyes Just before the gleams therein make hearts sway " Donna G.
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Date: 1/17/2009 11:49:00 AM
I never realized how precious being a youth was, til I became an adult. There's days I wish I could go back. Congrats on your well-deserved feature. :) Cheers, Alana
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Date: 1/17/2009 10:07:00 AM
Hi Mark, I loved this poem the first time I read it some time ago. It's powerful message has stayed with me. Truly the mark of a great piece of writing. Love and peace, Lainie
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Date: 1/14/2009 3:19:00 AM
Congratulations on your featured poem this week...Raul
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Date: 1/12/2009 6:52:00 AM
Congrats Mark on this excellent write being featured. Vince
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Date: 1/12/2009 5:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Mark. Love, Carol
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Date: 1/11/2009 11:55:00 PM
A lot of truth in this one Mark.rgds Brian
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Date: 1/11/2009 4:37:00 PM
The vivid imagery conveys your thoughts in this poem. Congratulations on having it featured this week. I like the creative format of the last stanza. Keep on writing. Wishing you continued success. Karen
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Date: 1/11/2009 1:25:00 PM
Oh to be young again!! Didn't appreciate it enough when I was!!:) Congratulations on this being featured work this week!~ Carrie
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Date: 1/11/2009 12:08:00 PM
Oh youth, is such a miraculous gift indeed. Congratulations on an excellent featured write. Love, Shar
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