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Upon a Falling Star

Upon a fallen star I made a wish upon a falling star Blew out my candles on my birthday Tossed a few pennies in the wishing well All that I may have a minute with you I could have asked for longer But that minute Will last me a lifetime I am not a greedy man I just want you all to myself One minute To hold you close One minute To speak the secrets of my heart One minute A still frame picture Forever frozen in time To say I Love You To stare into your eyes To hear you say the words That I have so longed to hear When you say You love me back No other greater joy To know your heart I have captured As you stole my heart One minute ago It is yours to keep Staring at the night sky Searching for another fallen star To wish for another minute with you Here’s to wishing I have fallen deeply In love With only you

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 8/26/2014 1:19:00 AM
How passionate! Nice and soothing. I love the stars and always a great connection with love, in terms of poetry and other writings. Regards, Bhavna
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Date: 8/13/2014 5:29:00 PM
How beautifully romantic! Way to go, my friend! Welcome to PoetrySoup. Happy writings! Pandita
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Date: 8/13/2014 6:12:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Honcho - I choose your first lovely written free verse :) - Nice to meet you! - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- P-Soup Rule: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup as a haven PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/12/2014 11:57:00 PM
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