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Up Until Midnight

Up until midnight am I looking for a rhyme It's late I say to bed I should lay. It used to be up until midnight I was with a lover you see but no longer is he. Alone I lay with my thought instead of pleasure sought it's now words at play Instead of a roll in the hay. 7/7/15

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Date: 7/30/2015 1:31:00 AM
Cleverly constructed - well done, Lee. Julia, xx
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Date: 7/13/2015 9:14:00 PM
Lee, congrats on your win! Love, Kim
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Date: 7/13/2015 12:20:00 AM
Lee, thank you for the support... SKAT
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Date: 7/8/2015 10:43:00 AM
Good little fun piece with tongue in cheek chuckles. Emile.
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/8/2015 11:14:00 AM
Emile thank you! : )
Date: 7/8/2015 2:25:00 AM
What a gem mate put a smile on my dial. cheers Kev
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/8/2015 11:14:00 AM
Thank you Kevin! : )
Date: 7/8/2015 1:04:00 AM
Lee, this free verse made me chuckle, somehow the words tumbling around in the bed are less complicated that the lover in the bed most of the time anyways, a wonderful 7
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Lee Carter
Date: 7/8/2015 1:19:00 AM
Thanks BW I agree this is sometimes true : )

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