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Up But Down-Part3

Up but down…part-3 In my errand for a fill of Hilly air, I can’t forget its Kicking present, its woes and ills Carrying that down-to- earth ache To sooth which I run up and down While the days worryless and dour Don’t dither in their flow. And I Turn to musing on these hills Long after my bus had belted Down its narrow, winding slopes Tearing away its dry and shy But superbly high-flying air

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 9/22/2012 12:49:00 PM
You just absorbed all the beauty scenery around you! I too can get caught up in the simplicity of such simple things! This bus ride took me to a similar area here called Fort Ancient...long steep and oft dangerous winding roads! Nice write and glad I revisited it! Looking 4 more work of yours, Jag...U must be busy with family...Hope all is well! :) gwendolen
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Date: 9/22/2012 12:50:00 PM
beautiful (not beauty)..ooops...
Date: 7/7/2012 6:17:00 AM
Feeling the sentimental value of these amusing hills....the flow in the 3rd stanza is great....
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