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UP AND DOWN Playing with my friends in chill air, Skipping with my sister with a broken teeth, Jumping with my brother with a broken leg, Cooking with my mother with a burnt finger, Climbing a tree with a broken leg, Chasing with my father for my mischief, But still, as a child, all I know Is to forget and re-try. I have a mind to play with my friends, I have a leg to jump with my brother, I have a finger to cook with my mother, I have a head to climb trees, But oh! What stops me ?? Alas! I don’t have a heart, That feels free to be my own. I wish I were a child again.

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Date: 11/3/2018 12:20:00 PM
Too good to be true
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Date: 3/5/2016 4:57:00 AM
Awesome win
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Date: 2/29/2016 8:20:00 AM
Thank you for participating in my contest “Two Lenses”..It was an honor to read your entry..Sara
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Fameetha Alambasha
Date: 3/1/2016 7:23:00 AM
thank you
Date: 2/28/2016 7:06:00 AM
Wonderful write, Fameetha. Welcome to Soup and please feel free to express yourself. Hugs, Bobby
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Date: 3/1/2016 7:23:00 AM
thank you
Date: 2/27/2016 12:48:00 PM
Congratulations on your win! Very creative and clever.
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Fameetha Alambasha
Date: 3/1/2016 7:23:00 AM
thank u
Date: 2/24/2016 3:51:00 AM
- Welcome with your first poems here on PoetrySoup, Fameetha - PoetrySoup is simply the world's best :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Fameetha Alambasha
Date: 3/1/2016 7:24:00 AM
thank u
Date: 2/20/2016 8:29:00 PM
Fameetha, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT
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Fameetha Alambasha
Date: 2/21/2016 7:19:00 AM
May i know about u
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Fameetha Alambasha
Date: 2/21/2016 7:18:00 AM
Hi... i am doing my UG course in Salem(INDIA).. thks everyone for your warm welcome...
Date: 2/20/2016 1:27:00 PM
fameetha, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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Fameetha Alambasha
Date: 2/21/2016 7:17:00 AM
Thank you...
Date: 2/19/2016 1:38:00 AM
Fameetha, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Fameetha Alambasha
Date: 2/19/2016 5:51:00 AM
Thank You very much.. i am just a beginner.. but i am passionate towards poetry.. its my long day dream to post a poem.. so plz do help me to improve

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