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flying up and up I let the soft breeze take me up above the clouds . . . this earthly life left behind to linger with sparkling stars ______________________ August 1, 2016 Poetry/Tanka/up above Copyright Protected, ID 16-83-230-0 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym.

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Date: 8/3/2016 8:59:00 PM
Hi Constance, a beautiful Tanka from you.The image is so easy to picture. Stop by the starlight stream when you are there. I love the content of this one. A well written Tanka. Excellent work. Most definitely a seven. Hugs....Mike. xx
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Date: 8/3/2016 3:36:00 PM
Lovely words BW.
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Date: 8/2/2016 7:53:00 AM
What a beautiful way to grace the subject, very nice :)
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Date: 8/2/2016 2:03:00 AM
Nice tanka for the contest, Constance:) All the best:)
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Date: 8/1/2016 7:10:00 PM
Very lovely piece Constance. The picture goes so well with the poem.
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