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Up and Away

UP AND AWAY Grumbling rumbling ground falls silent She feels for freedom with delight And her wing flaps’ gentle movement Lets her scale invisible height Shining metal sheets a-polish Steeply sloping wings now fly And massive silver flying fish Great creature hauls up thru the sky Rising to the clouds and sun We hear her engines whine and strain Hold our breath and urge her on Thru the sea of mist and rain Wispy white the clouds are rent Engines sing their song now soft Purring as the tension’s spent In freedom’s sunlight here aloft

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 7/29/2014 2:01:00 PM
Sidney, A nice winning Quatrain. I don't know the form, however --Well done... Always ~LINDA
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Date: 7/28/2014 7:15:00 AM
Congrats on a great win, dear Sidney.. I so enjoyed the ride.. I don't actually fly... Hugs.. Arlene
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Date: 7/28/2014 1:17:00 AM
Amazing and wonderful write, Congrats. Sidney
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Date: 7/28/2014 12:05:00 AM
And we who are along for the ride are knowing there is no way such a weighty thing can fly. well done and congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 7/27/2014 8:51:00 PM
I enjoyed the adventure in this poem as it took flight! Very nice work, Sidney! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 7/2/2013 3:45:00 PM
So glad to see you writing, yet couldn't think of a thing for this one. Congrad's on Your win. Light & Love
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Date: 7/1/2013 10:26:00 PM
a sweet above the clouds poem........... SKAT
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Date: 6/25/2013 9:47:00 PM
Sidney, CONGRATULATIONS! on your awesome win, in the "Above the Clouds" a contest by Drake Eszes. have yourself a nice one... xox~ LINDA
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Date: 6/25/2013 8:36:00 PM
I like this one Sidney. Awesome to be flying above the clouds. congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Date: 6/25/2013 2:39:00 PM
I quite enjoyed this writing, Sidney. You were very descriptive in your verbiage and the flow was quite good. Solid ending too. Thanks so much for submitting this to my contest!
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Sidney Beck
Date: 7/28/2014 3:20:00 AM
Thanks Drake for reading and liking my effort....best regards Syd
Date: 5/4/2013 7:58:00 AM
- A enjoyable poem to read!:) - Have a lovely weekend Sidney! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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