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i took one last look At all the things That you used To make you, you The you only i knew The you i loved And i smiled a momentary smile Picturing you days from now Glancing at the things that you might carry from here with you A brush, an eyeliner, lipstick And i saw my smile In the mirror that you used The mirror that i used to use To look at you But the glass never did catch the glance i saw in me When i looked back And you were no longer there

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 2/20/2009 7:31:00 AM
This is really touching stuff. Excellent melancholy write. Vince
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Date: 2/18/2009 8:04:00 PM
Oh Gerry this is so beautiful, sad, but beautiful. Your comment made me smile, and yes I am. Laurie
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