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Unzipped Lips

Love’s emphatic sigh Complete with warm air and wind Saying I love you Entrant into Nancy Jones' "Unzipped Lips" contest 5/16/2012

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/22/2012 8:59:00 PM

wow, this is NICE, Russell. It's one I somehow had missed.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 5/18/2012 11:54:00 AM

Lovely senryu. Best of luck in the contest.

Cecilia Macfarlane

Date: 5/17/2012 5:19:00 PM

Wonderful sweet entry Russell ....I love it!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 5/17/2012 11:19:00 AM

Enjoyed reading your work for the contest..Winner for sure..Whispered I love you are very special..Thanks for stopping by..Sara

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/17/2012 9:38:00 AM

i can;t unzip my lips, russell.. got to say, " wow" for putting this together into one sensational imagery... i wish i can write like this!... sensational, my friend!..:) win it and huggs!

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/17/2012 9:38:00 AM

i can;t unzip my lips, russell.. got to say, " wow" for putting this together into one sensational imagery... i wish i can write like this!... sensational, my friend!..:) win it and huggs!