Unwrapped Box

Life is Sometimes like An unwrapped box Unknowing the contents Inside Expect Everything In your routine Surprise would not be a Big deal Awe should Be the key To receive the The gifts that life offers Always Nayda Ivette 10-28-2015

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Funom Makama

Date: 10/30/2015 7:17:00 AM

This is lovely and great! I miss your work my dear poet. Refreshing... so refreshing!!

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 10/30/2015 4:14:00 PM

Thank you very much Funom.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/28/2015 6:37:00 PM

wonderful message in this one for that contest of silent one! (is it for Silent One? I think it would work, then you need to say the title the way he says in the contest rules)

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores
Date: 10/28/2015 7:31:00 PM

Thank you Andrea. Is not for a contest, but I would considerate it.