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Yellow pieces of weed eater line.. Red tattered piece of old shop rag.. Blue traces of a worn out old tarp.. White shredded remnants of a plastic bag.. I watched you from the early spring, doing your ritual gathering, of unwanted things, just laying around but, to you they were treasures, surely found Among dry meadow grass and scattered twigs, you poked and pulled and tugged and weaved. Then you tucked bits here and there, of stuffing you sneaked from my old lawn chair. Creating your masterpiece before my eyes, the fanciest bird nest around. You flew back and forth a million times, while chirpping and singing away.. never complaining you worked all day. Then babies came, all fuzzy and small, you worked so hard to feed them all, until they grew their beautiful wings. and began singing their own song And when they left you one by one.. you sang to me once again then simply flew away. Your wonderful nest built with such care with colorful decorations added for flair now rests in a basket, by my chair..... ©Donna Jones Seeing Beauty In Imperfection 12-3-2013

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Date: 5/13/2014 4:57:00 PM
This is such a smart and beautiful poem about the resourcefulness of creatures whom do not bother doubting or questioning the means of instinct and survival Donna. Birds are peculiar magic. J.A.B.
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Date: 5/20/2014 10:39:00 PM
Thanks very much for stopping by Justin.....I appreciate it..:-) :-)
Date: 4/24/2014 10:41:00 PM
This is so neat. I am glad you found a place for it. Two weeks ago, I gave my granddaughter a real pretty picture that I had bought 12 years ago for$15.00 Last night she called and said , that she checked it in the internet and could be worth $ 10.000 - I was glad I didn't sell it in a garage sale.. Lucilla
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Date: 2/23/2014 9:08:00 AM
I really really like this one!
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Date: 12/28/2013 6:22:00 AM
Wow that was a great poem Donna. I enjoyed that from start to finish. One of the best! Great job!
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Date: 12/27/2013 5:54:00 PM
Nicely done...I really enjoyed this
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Date: 12/24/2013 5:57:00 AM
Unusual... nice... Merry Xmas... Terry
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Date: 12/18/2013 3:19:00 PM
oh my gosh, you were truly inspired by this contest to do such a unique poem. Can't believe I never saw this one yet and I'm glad to notice down here that it won the contest!! congrats
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Date: 12/18/2013 2:38:00 PM
Wow Donna, almost perfect and not just for the birds..' congrats..
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Date: 12/18/2013 6:44:00 AM
Donna so charming I love it congrats on win Shadow x smile hug
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Date: 12/17/2013 9:47:00 PM
Congratulations Donna, it is nice following up on Nette's contest... xox...Love Linda
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Date: 12/17/2013 5:49:00 PM
congrats on a fine win Donna
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Date: 12/17/2013 12:46:00 PM
This is so special Donna, I see why it was chosen. Congratulations
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Date: 12/17/2013 10:38:00 AM
- Congratulations on your winning poem in the: "SEEING BEAUTY..." contest, Donna. - A pleasure to read your poem again and a pleasure to take part. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/17/2013 8:23:00 AM
A joy to read your poem on seeing the beauty in imperfection and congratulations on the win, Donna
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Date: 12/8/2013 10:30:00 PM
That was beautiful Donna, I don't write poetry but I do love reading it and to me that was lovely I got a lot of enjoyment out of it picturing the bird building her nest, good luck. Vera
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Date: 12/6/2013 8:24:00 AM
I have enjoyed catching up on your poetry today and it has highlighted what I have been missing. Wonderful poem that captures the scene so beautifully. Really excellent work.
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Date: 12/5/2013 11:06:00 PM
You express yourself so perfectly my friend! I may not be on much for about week, I'm having problems with my teeth, big time pain, I can't seem to get anyone to really help me...I always have to wait until they have an opening for me to get in even if it is an Emergency! So I must wait until Monday, and I am in a lot of pain these days, there are at least 2 teeth that need removal...I'm afraid of having pain all through the weekend! So now think of me these few days! I'll try to get on soon!
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Date: 12/5/2013 6:02:00 PM
oooooooooh! that was beautiful Donna, absolutely loved it, keep up the writing, loved reading this one.
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Date: 12/5/2013 8:21:00 AM
Now this poem is a winner! A beautiful way to look at a bird's nest. Loved it.
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Date: 12/5/2013 5:50:00 PM
Monterey...your beauty and smile lights up the page...you look so happy....thank you..
Date: 12/5/2013 8:03:00 AM
I love the fondness shown to this bird and its maternal instinct and its hard working skill.Excellent poem which touched my heart as I adore animals and birds.
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Date: 12/5/2013 5:48:00 PM
Thank you Charmaine...so glad to see your pretty face and Christmas spirit
Date: 12/4/2013 2:06:00 PM
Beautiful, my lovely MD......If this doesn't deserve a win, I don't know what does...........Simply beautiful........xoxoxoxo
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Date: 12/5/2013 5:42:00 PM
Oh thank you my dearest....
Date: 12/4/2013 8:20:00 AM
I'm seeing the beauty in your words... very touching Donna dear Donna! A love story about the world around us! Big hugs and sweet love, Jack XOXOXOX
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Date: 12/5/2013 5:43:00 PM
BIG hugs back....thank you Jack
Date: 12/4/2013 4:45:00 AM
- Small animals but very skilled at making buildings .... a safe and warm home for their children. - A poem lovely Donna. - Wish you luck in the contest! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/5/2013 5:45:00 PM
Thank you so much Anne Lise..yes they are amazing
Date: 12/4/2013 12:27:00 AM
This is a very beautiful and lovely poem which I love and enjoy reading today my dear friend Donna. I love the wonderful image and the amazing things done by those birds in their lives as you've described stunningly in your creative words. This is a winner form me. Kudos on this excellent write! TYSM for sharing. TYSM as well for stopping by w/your lovely comments. My honor for me to know that you faved my poem. TYSM! More blessings! love lots, Leonora
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Date: 12/5/2013 5:45:00 PM
Thank you lovely Leonora....
Date: 12/3/2013 9:19:00 PM
Nice expressions on the birds activities in nature, Donna
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Date: 12/5/2013 5:46:00 PM
Thank you Dr Ram...

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