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Unwanted

To have been the joke who bears the jest with grace, always first to laugh, but harboring disdain, to have been the clown that wears a painted face, always with a smile to masquerade the pain, to have been your fool that suffers in a place where but frazzled threads of dignity remain, ‘tis ironic to learn that I bear no worth from a sentient soul consenting my birth. 10-1-22

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Date: 10/6/2022 6:23:00 PM
Deep soul searing sadness, so exquisitely penned, Mark. Congrats on your well deserved win
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Date: 10/6/2022 5:56:00 AM
Mark, this one brought tears to my eyes because I know it speaks for so many who we were unwanted from the beginning. So skillfully written and vividly descriptive! Janice
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Date: 10/4/2022 4:23:00 AM
Congrats! Thanks for sharing this... a sad reality, exposed by your awesome poetic style. God bless you.
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Date: 10/3/2022 1:14:00 PM
Congratulations on this winner. Way to go. Sad that anyone would feel unwanted, but better than being wanted in some situations. Enjoyed reading your work. Sara
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Date: 10/3/2022 7:58:00 AM
Greetings Mark, The originality of your Ottava rima is truly top notch. It is both heart aching + inspiring for the reader. It speaks to the human soul of self-survival above the battering of "jests" and put downs. Congratulations! Brian
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Date: 10/3/2022 7:23:00 AM
Congratulations on your win Mark! Linda
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Date: 10/3/2022 3:10:00 AM
Awesome write, Mark. The clown that wears the painted face always with a smile to masquerade the pain...so true it seems to be. Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/2/2022 6:02:00 PM
Dear Mark, your poem is so emotive and evocative. Expressive beauty shines within the deep sadness of this piece. Congratulations for your excellent win in Milt’s contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Date: 10/2/2022 4:35:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your winning entry, Mark. Congratulations.
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Date: 10/2/2022 11:29:00 AM
Such sadness described so movingly and vividly. CONGRATS on your win, Mark. Janice
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Mark Massey
Date: 10/2/2022 11:34:00 AM
Thank you Janice
Date: 10/2/2022 10:22:00 AM
Mark, congratulations on your winning placement in my Ottava Rima contest! I particularly enjoyed the infinitive phrases, which stood out for me. Nice job!
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Mark Massey
Date: 10/2/2022 11:33:00 AM
Thank you Milt

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