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Unusual Roar

"On the ocean waves" of deep cobalt blue Rides white foam spray that brushes rocky shore Tickles their fantasy leaves in quick spew After has caused such unusual roar Rocky shore, rocky times life gives damp sprays Coating everyone with uncertainties Just as the rocks wear and age_ life assays Each one to analyze the quantities Of good_bad giving opportunities To all to grow deeper like blue ocean Deeper than surface waves _deep abilities Just few minutes each day in devotion "On the ocean waves" ride thoughts_emotions Let them be deeper accumulations Sponsor: Francine Roberts Contest: "On The Ocean Waves"

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Date: 8/9/2012 10:27:00 AM
A well deserved win for you. Congratulations Sara. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/5/2012 9:49:00 AM
A clever and thoughtful write, Sara! Congrats on your win...enjoyed the read!! Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 8/3/2012 8:42:00 AM
Congratulations Sara xx
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Date: 7/29/2012 1:19:00 PM
Really really good one Sara; this is a write that touches my thoughts and senses, hope you are well yours Joe..)
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Date: 7/28/2012 6:42:00 PM
REading this one again. It's quite philosophical, my friend!!
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Date: 7/28/2012 5:36:00 PM
Brilliant for the contest - and I like it very much - hope for a win for you. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 7/28/2012 3:26:00 PM
clever and beautiful sonnet, my friend
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Date: 7/28/2012 10:34:00 AM
I respect the word arrangements Sara - "tickles their fantasy leaves in quick spew" a vivid picture for my mind; induce thoughts of assuming accountability for my reactions & creations - thanks - J.A.B.
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Date: 7/28/2012 7:26:00 AM
Sara....great title! And metaphors utilized in journey of life are brisk with salt air! Glad to hear Doris is getting some fresh air at home....will keep her in my prayers...jamesy
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Date: 7/28/2012 6:26:00 AM
sweet melody playing on my mind, sara... i like the repetition of your phrase... this looks better than mine...winning huggs! :)
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Date: 7/27/2012 11:26:00 PM
Love the imagery here Sara, deep thoughts. Thanks for stopping by "It's All In The Jeans" Although I am the one who wrote it, I laugh everytime I read it...so funny! Blessings and one love. Joy Wells
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Date: 7/27/2012 11:33:00 AM
a good way to do the ocean wave contest. I better get started on that one soon!!
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